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Proving Your Points!. Introduction. Body. Developing Strong Body Paragraphs. Conclusion. Literary Analysis—in general . Purpose: to present and prove an argument Argument presented in your thesis (essay) or topic sentence (paragraph) Audience: your readers
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Proving Your Points! Introduction Body Developing StrongBody Paragraphs Conclusion
Literary Analysis—in general • Purpose: to present and prove an argument • Argument presented in your thesis (essay) or topic sentence (paragraph) • Audience: your readers • Adults/young adults who are familiar with the text you are analyzing • Details: textual evidence to prove your argument • Direct quotations • Paraphrases • Summaries (of long passages)
Components • Topic sentence • States clearly the main point to develop/prove • Body • Presents all of the details in a coherent order that develop/ prove/support the main point • Conclusion • Wraps up point and transitions to the next point/body paragraph Introduction Body Conclusion
The Topic Sentence of the Body Paragraph (Introduction) • What’s the point I’m going to develop in this particular paragraph? • One point only per paragraph! • You may use as many paragraphs as you need to develop different aspects of this point, but you may not develop more than one point per paragraph.
Context for Example • Topic & purpose of essay: • to analyze the text of MLK’s “I Have a Dream” speech and show how his use of literary and rhetorical devices greatly enhances his message. • The topic of this sample body paragraph: King’s use of metaphor • Use specific textual details • NOT simply to identify the metaphors
The Topic Sentence • State point clearly and concisely. • Present point of analysisor argument in topic sentence, avoiding vague generalities. • Example: • Weak: King uses metaphors throughout his speech. • Strong: King’s initial metaphors conjure up?(not right—diction connotes witchcraft) paint?(nah—not powerful enough—I want the idea of resurrecting memories . . . . . that’s it!) resurrect images of slavery before his audience’s eyes.
The Body of the Body Paragraph • What specific details will I use to prove, illustrate, define, describe, (etc.) my point? • You must think like a lawyer: the burden of proof is on you!
The Body • Use specific details to prove your point. • Topic sentence: King’s initial metaphors resurrect images of slavery before his audience’s eyes. • Details: • “This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice.” • “One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination.”
Notes on Using Details • Use only that part of the quotation that is particularly apt. • apt: suited to the purpose or occasion; appropriate. • Incorporate quoted passages seamlessly into your own writing. • Introduce quotations with apt words and phrases—build a wide repertoire from which to choose. • Avoid stringing one quoted passage after another. Practice Time!
Body Paragraph Parts:The Conclusion • “The Big So What!” • What conclusion can I draw from the point I stated and the support I used to prove it?
The Conclusion • Drive your point all the way home, and park it in “The Big So What?” garage. • Conclude with an astute analysis of the point and supporting textual evidence. • Tie point analysis back to the overriding thesis and its effects on the work as a whole. • Be concise! • Consider your audience. • Don’t belabor the point (don’t over-explain).