Eliot, Art and Modern Life: Revising for Clarity and Meaning

1. Eliot, Art and Modern Life:Revising for Clarity and Meaning

2. Unrevised Text 1 Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the subjective experience of a person and the objective reality. He reflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as he challenges the limits of one’s consciousness.

3. Main Trouble Spots:(I Do; You Watch) • Syntax and Explanation • Pronouns • Key Ideas • Key Verbs

4. TS1 – Syntax & Explanation Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the subjective experience of a person and the objective reality. He reflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as he challenges the limits of one’s consciousness.

5. TS1 – Syntax & Explanation Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the subjective experience of a person and the objective reality. Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the mind’s subjective experience of itself a person and the objective reality; that is, the poem represents the workings of the mind as it reflects upon itself and the world.

6. TS2 – Pronouns Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the subjective experience of a person and the objective reality. He reflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as he challenges the limits of one’s consciousness. By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

7. TS2 – Pronouns Hereflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as he challenges the limits of one’s consciousness. HeThe poem reflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as heit challenges the limits of one’s consciousness.

8. TS3 – Key Ideas The poem reflects on the fragmented alienation from physical reality as it challenges the limits of consciousness. The poem reflects on the fragmentedthe mind’s experience of alienation from physical reality.as itThis alienation challenges the limits of consciousnessindividual’s capacity to make meaning in a meaningless world and leads to a fragmented sense of self.

9. TS4 – Key Verbs The poem reflects on the mind’s experience of alienation from physical reality. This alienation challenges the individual’s capacity to make meaning in a meaningless world and leads to a fragmented sense of self. The poem portrays on the mind’s experience of alienation from physical reality. This alienation challenges the individual’s capacity to make meaning in a meaningless world and leads to a fragmented sense of self.

10. Unrevised Text 1 Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the subjective experience of a person and the objective reality. He reflects on the fragmented alienation from the physical reality as he challenges the limits of one’s consciousness.

11. Revised Text 1 Preludes (1917), a poem by T.S Eliot, portray the mind’s subjective experience of itself and objective reality; that is, the poem represents the workings of the mind as it reflects upon itself and the world. The poem portrays the mind’s experience of alienation from physical reality. This alienation challenges the individual’s capacity to make meaning in a meaningless world and leads to a fragmented sense of self.

12. Unrevised Text 2: (I Do; You Help) By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S. Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

13. TS1 – ? By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S. Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

14. TS2 – ? By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S. Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

15. TS3 – ? By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S. Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

16. Unrevised Text 2 By experimenting and pushing the boundaries of the traditional language used, T.S. Eliot suggests that modernism can create confusion about one’s identity.

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18. Unrevised Text 3: (You Do; I Help) In “Preludes”, Eliot establishes a removed subconscious mind viewing a modern world. Through this relationship, it gives the impression that although the modern world is filled with objects, it does little to touch on the deeper workings of the mind. This reflects on a greater sense of uncertainty arising from a fragmentation of identity, another experience reflected “Preludes”.

19. In “Preludes”, Eliot establishes a removed subconscious mind viewing a modern world. Through this relationship, it gives the impression that although the modern world is filled with objects, it does little to touch on the deeper workings of the mind. This reflects on a greater sense of uncertainty arising from a fragmentation of identity, another experience reflected “Preludes”.

20. In “Preludes”, Eliot establishes a removed subconscious mind viewing a modern world. Through this relationship, it gives the impression that although the modern world is filled with objects, it does little to touch on the deeper workings of the mind. This reflects on a greater sense of uncertainty arising from a fragmentation of identity, another experience reflected “Preludes”.

21. In “Preludes”, Eliot establishes a removed subconscious mind viewing a modern world. Through this relationship, it gives the impression that although the modern world is filled with objects, it does little to touch on the deeper workings of the mind. This reflects on a greater sense of uncertainty arising from a fragmentation of identity, another experience reflected “Preludes”.

22. Unrevised Text 3 In “Preludes”, Eliot establishes a removed subconscious mind viewing a modern world. Through this relationship, it gives the impression that although the modern world is filled with objects, it does little to touch on the deeper workings of the mind. This is done through contrasts between tangible and intangible objects and actions. This reflects on a greater sense of uncertainty arising from a fragmentation of identity, another experience reflected “Preludes”.

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