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Improve Writing. ( Incorrect) A person lost their phone . (Correct) A person lost his/her phone. (Correct) The people lost their phones.
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Improve Writing (Incorrect) A person lost their phone. (Correct) A person lost his/her phone. (Correct) The people lost their phones.
cDon’t use first personDon’t address the readerExamples of No-NosI think this short story is sad.You should not read it.The book is yours.We can find it anywhere
Cooptunes.com Source in TextA critic, Leonard Mustazza, argues that Mrs. Hale causes Mrs. Peters to identify with the accused (494).
Sentence Parallelism A Writer’s Reference: Page 111. A movie can be a comedy, drama, or musical. He wanted to swim, golf, and race. She fell over the rug, stumbled into the chair, and slid under the table. cooptoons.com
cooptoons.comAvoid Using Slang, Cliches, Jargon, Regional ExpressionsA Writer’s Reference: Page 159-1691. Our hopes went down the drain.2. I slept like a log.3. We will facilitate the next group.4. That dog won’t hunt.