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Thesis Statements. How to write effective thesis statements components. What does a thesis statement do?. Most important sentence in the essay Explicitly and assertively defines the Factual Assertion Takes a stand Main idea or ideas Narrowed focus. Factual Assertion.
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Thesis Statements How to write effective thesis statements components
What does a thesis statement do? • Most important sentence in the essay • Explicitly and assertively defines the • Factual Assertion • Takes a stand • Main idea or ideas • Narrowed focus
Factual Assertion • A thesis statement is an assertion with facts, not a statement of fact or an observation. • Fact or observation: People use many lawn chemicals. • Thesis: People are poisoning the environment with chemicals merely to keep their lawns clean.
Takes a stand A thesis takes a stand rather than announcing a subject. Announcement: The thesis of this paper is the difficulty of solving our environmental problems. Thesis: Solving our environmental problems is more difficult than many environmentalists believe.
The main idea A thesis is the main idea, not the title. It must be a complete sentence that explains in some detail what you expect to write about. Title: Social Security and Old Age. Thesis: Continuing changes in the Social Security System makes it almost impossible to plan intelligently for one's retirement.
Narrow focus A thesis statement is narrow, rather than broad. If the thesis statement is sufficiently narrow, it can be fully supported. Broad: The American steel industry has many problems. Narrow: The primary problem if the American steel industry is the lack of funds to renovate outdated plants and equipment.
How do you know it is strong? • Did you answer the question? • Can others oppose what you say? • Make an argument • Is it specific? • Does it pass the “so-what” test? • Does it explain ‘how’ and ‘why’?
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