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Duplication. Try to avoid repeating yourself Don’t Parents can refer back to film’s ratings when deciding the question as to whether the movie is suitable for their kids. --- Do Parents can refer back to the film’s ratings when deciding whether a movie is suitable for their kids.
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Duplication • Try to avoid repeating yourself • Don’t Parents can refer back to film’s ratings when deciding the question as to whether the movie is suitable for their kids. --- Do Parents can refer back to the film’s ratings when deciding whether a movie is suitable for their kids.
Elaborate Language • Try to avoid unnecisarily complex words and phrases ~Don’t Please render your remuneration at the door. ~Do Please pay at the door.
Vague, General Words • Use words to express the specific meaning you have in mind Don’t • People spoke well of the movie. Do Critics praised Whale Rider.