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LOTF: Embedding Text. Embedding Text Support. Embedding text requires the writer to make the words of the author’s sentence fit flawlessly into the context of their sentence. Examples. Sam and Eric do everything together, sharing one mind between them.
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Embedding Text Support • Embedding text requires the writer to make the words of the author’s sentence fit flawlessly into the context of their sentence.
Examples • Sam and Eric do everything together, sharing one mind between them. • “But they could never manage to do things sensibly if that meant acting independently.” • Sam and Eric share one mind, for they could never accomplish a task “if that meant acting independently.” • Sam and Eric “could never manage to do things sensibly,” if one was forced to separate themselves from his counterpoint.
Examples • The boys armed themselves with fear and flimsy spears as they readied themselves to take on the Beast. • The boys “bristled with hunting spears” recognizing that “the bright morning was full of threats” forming a “fence of sharpened wood” in the anticipation of the great undefined evil on the horizon.
Provide Text Support- Chapter 8 • The relationship between Ralph and Jack sours as a result of Jack’s continued insistence that Ralph is unfit to rule. • Jack is shamed by his failed mutiny, finding his request for the voters’ assent met silence. • Piggy’s reticence in speaking and leading vanish once Jack departs from the group, allowing him to fully use the creativity of his brain. • Jack’s initial hunt after gaining control of a contingent of hunters is an emotional mixture of lust and violence. • Simon finds himself face to face with the Lord of the Flies whose evil influence is already spreading throughout the island and longs to corrupt Simon.