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The following sentence is grammatically correct. Yes/No/Why? H oliday break is only 18 days away, it will be so nice to sleep in for a week!!. A Weeee Little Writing Mini Lesson . . . . Comma Splices . . . What NOT to write . . .
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The following sentence is grammatically correct. Yes/No/Why?Holiday break is only 18 days away, it will be so nice to sleep in for a week!!
A Weeee Little Writing Mini Lesson . . . Comma Splices . . . What NOT to write . . .
A COMMA SPLICE is when a comma (alone) INCORRECTLY t-r-i-e-s to connect two independent clauses together.
A comma (alone) can NEVER, EVER connect two independent clauses together. Never, ever, ever. Ever, ever.
There are a variety of ways that a writer can “fix” a comma splice (c/s):
Make two separate independent clauses by adding a period and a capital letter: Holiday break is only 18 days away. It will be so nice to sleep in for a week!!
2. Add a comma and a coordinating conjunction: Holiday break is only 18 days away, and it will be so nice to sleep in for a week!!
3. Add a semi colon: Holiday break is only 18 days away; it will be so nice to sleep in for a week!!
Fix ‘em up: Period 1 is so much fun, I just made a rhyme.
Fix ‘em up: Period 2 is very spiritual, Owen are you praying again??
Fix ‘em up: Period 3 are my sweeties, Agbola stop smiling . . .
Fix ‘em up: Period 4 is quite vivacious, it is never a dull class.