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Learn how to correct comma splices and fused sentences in English grammar. Practice exercises and examples provided. Enhance your writing skills today!
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Grammar GRAB AND GO
COMMA SPLICE A comma splice occurs when two main clauses (sentences) are joined together by a inappropriately placed comma. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
EXAMPLES • English is my best subject, I always do well on my tests. • Soccer is his favorite sport, he is the best player on the team.
How do I correct a CS? • Place a period between the two main clauses or sentences. • Add a comma after the conjunction to form a compound sentence. • Use a semicolon between the two sentences. • Ex. 1 • English is my best subject. I always do well on my tests. • English is my best subject, so I always do well on my tests. • English is my best subject; I always do well on my tests. • Ex. 2 • Soccer is his favorite sport. He is the best player on the team. • Soccer is his favorite sport, and he is the best player on the team. • Soccer is his favorite sport; he is the best player on the team.
Now you try! • Look at the following sentences which contain commas splices. Using one of the three grammar fixes, correct them. • Thomas made the baseball team, I congratulated him the next day. • The movie was boring, I fell asleep before it ended. • My dog is very playful, she hides my shoes often. • The weather forecast calls for rain, our camping trip will be postponed.
FUSED SENTENCE • A fused sentence is when two main clauses are fused (joined) together with absolutely NO punctuation. • +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
EXAMPLES • Sharon Draper is one of my favorite authors she has written several books for people to enjoy. • Sometimes we take vacations other times we stay at home. • Exercise is great way to stay fit people should exercise at least one hour daily. • Steph Curry is my favorite basketball player I think he has an amazing jump shot. • Florida is a wonderful vacation spot there are so many things to do when you visit.
How do I correct a FS? • Fused sentences can be corrected in the same fashion as a sentence with a comma splice. Additionally, you can also use conjunctive adverbs such as: however, then, therefore, consequently, furthermore, hence, thus, undoubtedly and others. • Sharon Draper is one of my favorite authors. She has written several books for people to enjoy. • Sharon Draper is one of my favorite authors, and she has written several books for people to enjoy. • Sharon Draper is one of my favorite authors; furthermore, she has written several books for people to enjoy. • Sharon Draper is one of my favorite authors; she has written several book for people to enjoy. • Florida is a wonderful vacation spot. There are so many things to do when you visit. • Florida is a wonderful vacation spot, for there are so many things to do when you visit. • Florida is a wonderful vacation spot; there are so many things to do when you visit. • Florida is a wonderful vacation spot; thus, there are many things to do when you visit.
Now you try! I walked around the track my friend decided to jog.
TYPES OF SENTENCES Simple sentence. Cheesecake is my favorite dessert. Compound Cheesecake is my favorite dessert, but sweet potato pie is a close second. Complex Although I enjoy cheesecake and sweet potato pie, I am not the best baker.
Things to note • Compound sentences are typically formed using coordinating conjunctions such as: for, and, nor, but, or, yet and so (FANBOYS) • Complex sentences use subordinating conjunctions. These include: although, because, until, while, since, after and many others. • If the dependent clause with the subordinating conjunction comes at the beginning of a sentence, you need a comma; consequently, if the dependent clause is at the end, it does not require a comma. • Although she was very talented, she did not win the singing competition. • She did not win the singing competition although she was very talented.
EXAMPLES • The ballet dancer practiced for her upcoming performance daily. • The ballet dancer practiced for her upcoming performance daily, and she modified her diet temporarily. • Although she modified her diet temporarily, she continued to eat a well-portioned meal.