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Summary: Disposition of Comments for PDTR3 20943-5 SMMP

WG2N 1668. Summary: Disposition of Comments for PDTR3 20943-5 SMMP. Taesul SEO/ Sungjoon LIM KISTI/KDB, Korea. Overview. PDTR3 of 20943-5 SMMP obtained substantial support (32N2225) Comments to be resolved Canadian : 36 Japanese : 1 United States : 33 (Non-official).

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Summary: Disposition of Comments for PDTR3 20943-5 SMMP

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  1. WG2N1668 Summary:Disposition of Comments for PDTR3 20943-5 SMMP Taesul SEO/Sungjoon LIM KISTI/KDB, Korea Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  2. Overview • PDTR3 of 20943-5 SMMP obtained substantial support (32N2225) • Comments to be resolved • Canadian : 36 • Japanese : 1 • United States : 33 (Non-official) Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  3. Summary of Canadian Comments (1) • Comments for errors in transforming MS Word file into PDF format • 11 cmmnts : CA01, CA13~18, CA30~31, CA34~35 • Editor’s action : To request SC32 Secretariat special care while transforming word to pdf Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  4. Summary of Canadian Comments (2) • Structure of the manuscript • 5 cmmnts : CA04~05, CA09, CA25, CA27 • Editor’s action : Restructure the relevant parts of the manuscript reflecting the comments Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  5. Summary of Canadian Comments (3) • Unclear words or inconsistency of some words • 6 cmmnts : CA07~8, CA11, CA20~21, CA32 • Editor’s action : Make the unclear words clear and use some inconsistent words consistently • Data, data element, metadata element set, primary/secondary data element, mapping, … Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  6. Summary of Canadian Comments (3) • CA02 : The text doesn’t includes semantics and many-to-one/one-to-many mapping. • Proposals : Remove “semantic” from the title or add more description on semantics. • Editor’s action : Remove “semantic” from the title. Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  7. Summary of Canadian Comments (4) • CA03 : Define heterogeneity, add why it is important, and explain the relationship with factoring • Editor’s action : Accept all Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  8. Summary of Canadian Comments (5) • CA10 : Add DE and DEC to Abbreviation Clause • Editor’s action : Accept all Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  9. Summary of Canadian Comments (6) • CA12, CA19 : Change “semantic mapping” to “data element concept mapping” • Editor’s action : Change “semantic mapping” to “data element mapping” because mapping is performed at data element level under same data element concept. Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  10. Summary of Canadian Comments (7) • CA22~24 : Increase the completeness of the examples • Proposals : Modify some table field names and add DC as primary data elements • Editor’s action : Improve the example reflecting the comments Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  11. Summary of Canadian Comments (8) • CA26 : Questions about value mapping • Editor’s action : Improve the relevant parts reflecting the comments Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  12. Summary of Canadian Comments (8) • CA06, CA28~29 : Some advices for improvement • Proposals : Adopt heterogeneity type number and add/complete bibliographies • Editor’s action : Accept all Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  13. Summary of Canadian Comments (9) • CA33 : Necessity of Annex B • Proposals : Remove or add explanation • Editor’s action : Enhance Annex B and the text to include clear explanation about the relationship with factoring Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  14. Summary of Canadian Comments (10) • CA36 : General comments • No specific action is needed. Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  15. Summary of Japanese Comments (1) • JP01 : Comments for errors in transforming MS Word file into PDF format • Editor’s action : To request SC32 Secretariat special care while transforming word to pdf Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  16. Summary of US Comments (1) • Typing errors and English problems • 10 cmmnts : US05~07, US09, US12~13 US29~32 • Editor’s action : Accept all Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  17. Summary of US Comments (2) • US01~03 : Make the scope simple and rewrite the content • Editor’s action : Rewrite the scope reflecting the comments Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  18. Summary of US Comments (3) • US10~11, 26 : Structure of the manuscript • Editor’s action : Restructure the relevant parts of the manuscript reflecting the comments Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  19. Summary of US Comments (4) • US14, US16~17, US19 : Make unclear words clear • Proposals : Explain “less important” and “primary data element” • Editor’s action : Change “less important” to “to expect not to be used” and explain Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  20. Summary of US Comments (5) • US18 : Remove the sentence including “standardization” • Proposals : Same as above • Editor’s action : Remove “standardization” from the sentence because the sentence is important part of this TR Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  21. Summary of US Comments (6) • US33 : Change the title • Proposals : Change title to “Semantic Mapping Procedure” • Editor’s action : Change title to “Metadata Mapping Procedure” (cf. CA02) Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  22. Summary of US Comments (7) • Need discussion to resolve • US04, US08, US15, US20~25, US28 Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

  23. Conceptual Level (N:1) DEC CD (1:N) (1:N) (N:1) DE VD Representational Level CONCEPTUAL DOMAIN VALUE MEANING PERMISSIBLE VALUES (1:N) (1:1) (N:1) VALUE DOMAIN Mapping is performed at representational level, DE and PV. Disposition of Comments, PDTR3 20943-5

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