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Developing Your Writing Skills. 主讲 : 郑宁华. Developing Writing Skills. What is your understanding of writing? What do you think is a good piece of writing? What are the proper ways to develop writing skills?. What is a good article?. 1 .一篇好的文章,应当结构完整,语言流畅,整体统一,和谐连贯,内容充实、简洁。
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Developing Your Writing Skills 主讲: 郑宁华
Developing Writing Skills • What is your understanding of writing? • What do you think is a good piece of writing? • What are the proper ways to develop writing skills?
What is a good article? 1.一篇好的文章,应当结构完整,语言流畅,整体统一,和谐连贯,内容充实、简洁。 2. 无论什么样的文章,只要用上比较复杂的长句子和比较正式的用语和褒义词,就应判定为好文章。
3. 一篇文章的好坏,主要取决于内容。如果,情节引人入胜,语言和结构是不会影响文章质量的。 4.文章的和谐连贯有赖于叙述的逻辑性和衔接词语的正确使用。 5. 不同题材、体裁文章的谋篇、布局不同,写作应根据不同的写作目的,不同的读者对象,采用不同的写作方式及文体。
Developing Writing Skills • Speaking • Reading • Writing Practice • Write meaningful sentences • Write meaningful passages
Writing meaningful sentences • Jack is a student. • Jack is ahigh schoolstudent. • Jack is a high school studentin London. • Jack is a high school studentstudyingin London. • Jack is a high school student studyingin a private school in London.
Jack is a high school student studying in a private school with a history over 100 years in London. • 捷克是伦敦一所具有百年历史的私立学校的高中生。
I am glad to have this chance to express our thanks. • I am glad to have this chance to express our heartfelt thanks. • I am glad to have this chance to express our heartfelt thanks for yourhospitality.
I am glad to have this chance to express our heartfelt thanks for your hospitality during our stay in your country. • 我很高兴能有机会向您表示衷心的感谢, • 感谢我们在贵国逗留期间, 您对我们的热情款待.
作为我国著名的风景旅游区, 厦门四季常青, 百花争艳, 是一座美丽的城市, 它以”海上花园” 闻名于世
Xiaman is a beautiful city. • Xiaman is a beautiful citywith green trees and colorful flowers everywhere. • Xiaman is a beautiful city with green trees and colorful flowers everywhereall the year around.
As a famous scenic spot of our country, Xiaman is a beautiful city with green trees and colourful flowers everywhere all the year around.
As a famous scenic spot of our country, Xiaman is a beautiful city with green trees and colorful flowers everywhere all the year around, which is known throughout the world as “Garden on the Sea.”
Writing meaningful passages • Organization • How to develop the idea • How to join the ideas together • Language • Words and expressions • Verb tenses
How to develop the idea • Develop ideas step by step • Write with a main idea • From general to specific • Develop ideas by giving • Facts / examples / reasons / descriptions / comparisons …
(1) __________For me, I like rock music because it is so exciting. And my favorite rock band, (2) ________ in the world. I also like pop music. (3) _________ , because she enjoys dancing. However, my mother likes country music, (4) ________.
A.the “Foxy Ladies,” is one of the most famous rock bands B. My friend Lily loves dance music C. Different people have different ideas about music. D. for she thinks the kinds of music we like are too noisy.
C • (1) __________For me, I like rock music because it is so exciting. And my favorite rock band, (2) ________ in the world. I also like pop music. (3) _________ , because she enjoys dancing. However, my mother likes country music, (4) ________. A B D
Developing ideas • Different people have different ideas about music. For me, I like rock music because it is so exciting. And my favorite rock band, the “Foxy Ladies,” is one of the most famous rock bands
in the world. I also like pop music. My friend Lily loves dance music, because she enjoys dancing. However, my mother likes country music, for she thinks the kinds of music we like are too noisy.
写作中的注意事项 • 认真审题 • 明确写作目的 • 围绕中心写作 • 确定动词时态 • 恰当选择词语 • 注意结构/层次 • 恰当使用过渡词
恰当使用过渡词 • 举例 • for example, for instance, such as, that is to say… • 补充 • besides, what is more, moreover, also
原因/ 结果 • because (of), thus, as a result, • 转折 • however, while, but, although • 对比 • similarly, likewise, in the same way • on the other hand
结论 • All in all, On the whole, In conclusion… • 陈述观点 • I think, In my opinion I believe, I suppose
开始陈述 • to start with, first of all • 列举事实 • first, second, third, one, another, moreover, furthermore, finally
时间顺序 • at first, after that, finally, once, earlier, now, then • 空间顺序 • right, left, up, down, above, below,
1) The government decided not to fund the project_______________________ it seemed likely to fail. 2) ____________________, the world would be a much better place without nuclear power. because/ owing to the fact that In my opinion / Personally
First / First of all / To start with • 3) ___________________________, wash the wound with cold water. ____________________, wrap a bandage around the cut. ________________________ place the patient in a comfortable position and allow them to rest. Then / Next / After that Finally / Last but not least
4) He passed the exams; ___________________ , he was able to go to university. 5) By reducing your intake of foods __________ beef and lamb you can decrease your chances of having a heart attack in later life. therefore / so / as a result such as / like