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CORE: GENRE APPRENTICE

CORE: GENRE APPRENTICE. Word jails Keep them out of context and annotations easy to spot and so easy to fix! Additions: first-grade, simplistic words: good, bad, happy, sad … Tense Pick one and stick with it Many of you switch between past and present Compound adjectives

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CORE: GENRE APPRENTICE

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  1. CORE: GENRE APPRENTICE

  2. Word jails • Keep them out of context and annotations • easy to spot and so easy to fix! • Additions: first-grade, simplistic words: good, bad, happy, sad… • Tense • Pick one and stick with it • Many of you switch between past and present • Compound adjectives • When 2 words describe a person, place, or thing, hyphenate • Ex: Billy acquired a part-time job after school. • Ex: He tackled a man-eating alligator. • Ex: The red-eyed figure hissed a command.

  3. Run-ons • You can’t jam two or more sentences together into one • Separating two sentences by only a comma doesn’t fix the problem; it’s still a run on • PROBLEM: The night fell silently on the town, all • was still. • FIXED: The night fell silently on the town, and all • was still. • FIXED: All was still as the night fell silently on the • town. • FIXED: The night fell silently on the town as all • was still. • FIXED: The night fell silently on the town; all was • still.

  4. . • Condense! Combine! Vary! • Avoid saying the same thing twice • When you have two or three very short sentences in a row, try combining them into one to assist in fluency (flow) AND demonstrate your sophistication as a writer • Very syntax • See your notes or my teacher page under “writing” for alternate ways to start a sentence • Woman vs. women • Woman=1 female • Women=more than 1 female

  5. Plural vs. Possessive • After much practice, the athletes competed. • More than 1 athlete has competed. • After the athlete’s practice session, she was ready to compete. • 1 athlete has had a practice session. • After the athletes’ practice session, they were ready to compete. • More than 1 athlete has had a practice session.

  6. Semi-colons A semi-colon joins two independent but related SENTENCES PROBLEM: The night fell silently on the town; all sentence  quiet and still and threatening. not a sentence  FIXED:The night fell silently on the town; all was quiet and still and threatening.

  7. PRACTICE:Is each of the following correct or incorrect? The buds on the trees are about to blossom ; just a few more days, maybe a week. Slowly she dropped to the floor, resting her head in her hands ; no longer was she able to think. With every step closer to the door, her anxiety grew ; a beating heart and a bead of sweat plaguing her. Coming into focus, the picture revealed a grisly scene ; overturned furniture, blood-streaked walls, a cryptic message smeared on the refrigerator.

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