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Crafting the Invitation for Research. The Thesis Statement. The task takes time and careful consideration. The Thesis will answer your Controlling Question. The Thesis will adopt a moderate position that you endorse as the writer.
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Crafting the Invitation for Research The Thesis Statement
The task takes time and careful consideration • The Thesis will answer your Controlling Question. • The Thesis will adopt a moderate position that you endorse as the writer. • The Thesis will invite the reader into your perspective on the topic. • Begin with a series of simple statements.
Thesis: Inviting the audience to understand a perspective. • What do you want the audience to know about the issue presented? • Why is the perspective you plan to present important? • How will you phrase the invitation? Select powerful words from your research, to provide a clear and well written thesis that invites your audience to read the paper.
The first steps: • Look for answers to the smaller questions that make up your controlling question. • Look for answers to each of the questions in your Roman Numerals. Starting the climb
Sample “Invitations” #1 (Thesis Statements) • Nuclear power is a good resource to provide electricity but has its negative impact. Grade: (C) (Why a “C”?) Struggling up the slope
Sample “Invitations” #2(Thesis Statements) • The twentieth century provided a nuclear alternative that provides a relatively clean option for electrifying the world, but this source can make a negative impact on the environment. Grade: (B) (Why a “B”?) Pulling yourself up
Sample “Invitations” #3(Thesis Statements) • The twentieth century’s nuclear research has provided a fresh technology that is a relatively clean and generally safe source that meets modern electrical demands, but it also carries the threats of bio-radioactive exposure, nuclear plant disasters and the impact of possible long-term global environmental scars. Grade: (A) (Why an “A”?) Reaching the top!
Your Invitation (Thesis) • Look at your own invitation (thesis statement). How would you grade it? _______ • What could you do to improve upon the statement? • How will you state the issue to inform your audience and at the same time clarify the perspective you wish to support in your paper? • What diction will you add to improve the tone and quality of the thesis?
Supporting the invitation (Thesis) • Look at your topic sentences and your note card facts. Will they support what your thesis statement says? • If not, what more will you need in the form of research facts? • If so, how will you organize the material to best support your research perspective?
A Permanent Invitation? • As you develop the plan for your body paragraphs (support) you may need to continually revisit the invitation. • Does it need changing? • Does the perspective need more clarification? • Do the facts, observations and conclusions support your thesis?
A Permanent Invitation? • Review, revisit and revampthe thesis as you write the balance of the paper! • Do aperspective checkwith each paragraph! • Don’t be afraid toadjustthe invitation (thesis) to reach your audience!
YOU CAN DO THIS! Just take the time and follow the steps to research success!