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Advanced Print and Online Journalism (MC38B) Module 4: Analysing Media Content and Critical Thinking. Model, allegedly drug queen, on the lam By Karl Penhaul , CNN March 27, 2010. “The easiest thing to do is to stop reading.”- William E. Blundell (1988). A tenet of Journalism.
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Advanced Print and Online Journalism (MC38B)Module 4: AnalysingMedia Content and Critical Thinking Model, allegedly drug queen, on the lam By Karl Penhaul, CNN March 27, 2010
“The easiest thing to do is to stop reading.”- William E. Blundell (1988) A tenet of Journalism “The easiest thing to do is to stop reading.” - William E. Blundell (1988)
Objectives • Summary of “Model, alleged drug queen, on the lam • Structure: strengths and weaknesses • Content: strengths and weaknesses • Overall assessment based on accuracy, relevance, balance, style, originality and technical content
Summary of article • Interpol has issued an international arrest warrant for former model Angela (Angie) Sanclemente • Sanclemente, a Colombian, is believed to be in Argentina • Argentine authorities suspect she uses models to transport drugs internationally • Sanclementeused her Facebook page to insist she is innocent
Structure: Inverted Pyramid MUST HAVE INFORMATION ADDITIONAL INFORMATION JUST TO BE NICE
Structural strengths She pouts her collagen-filled lips and totters on golden stilettos as she parades down the catwalk. Camera flashes pop in the shaky video recording of the photo shoot. Colombian model Angie Sanclemente is an object of desire. This catches the reader’s attention
Structural strengths She pouts her collagen-filled lips and totters on golden stilettos as she parades down the catwalk. Camera flashes pop in the shaky video recording of the photo shoot. Colombian model Angie Sanclemente is an object of desire. But that was 10 years ago. Now Sanclemente is one of South America's "most wanted." The fallen beauty is on the run; Interpol has issued an international arrest warrant for her.
She pouts her collagen-filled lips and totters on golden stilettos as she parades down the catwalk. Camera flashes pop in the shaky video recording of the photo shoot. Colombian model Angie Sanclemente is an object of desire. • But that was 10 years ago. Now Sanclemente is one of South America's "most wanted." The fallen beauty is on the run; Interpol has issued an international arrest warrant for her. The woman whose ambition took her from poverty to a life of glamour is thought to be in Argentina. Authorities there suspect she may be the "queen pin" of an international operation that uses models as drug mules to move suitcases loaded with cocaine out of Buenos Aires airport. "I am convinced Sanclemente is heavily involved in drug trafficking but I still cannot determine exactly what role she plays," one Argentine source close to the investigation tells CNN.
Structural Weaknesses • The headline: • Model, allegedly drug queen, on the lam • “Model on the run” • The lead • Could I make the lead better?
New lead • Then, pouting her collagen-filled lips and tottering on golden stilettos while parading down the catwalk, made Angie Sanclemente an object of desire. Now, she is wanted for a completely different reason; Interpol has issued an international arrest warrant for her alleged connection to drug trafficking.
Structural weaknesses • Transitions • Ending
Content strengths • Theme: drug trafficking • News value: Interpol has issued an international arrest warrant for a suspected drug trafficking ring leader who is a woman • Who, what, where, when, why and how • Purpose: inform
Contentweaknesses • Achieves its purpose but within a very limited capacity • Additional research is needed • Several questions are left unanswered • Several sources but the majority of them are unnamed • The sources are not diverse enough • Writer asked questions, but not the right ones • Use of quotations left much to be desired
Content Weaknesses • "I am convinced Sanclemente is heavily involved in drug trafficking but I still cannot determine exactly what role she plays," one Argentine source close to the investigation tells CNN. • THIS SAYS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!
Fact Checking • Former model, 30-year-old Angie Sanclemente on the run • Interpol issued international arrest warrant fro her • Six people in custody, four men, two women • December as she tried to board a flight bound for Cancun, Mexico with 55 kg (120 pounds) of cocaine. That could be worth more than $3.3 million once sold on the streets of the United States or Europe
Assessment • Accuracy • Relevance • Balance • Style • Originality • Technical Content
Finalgrade Below average article Thank you. Questions and comment…