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Integrating quotes into your writing. What to do and what to avoid. DO. Be precise in your use of quotes Make sure that your quote supports your thesis - your selected theme, in this case. Introduce your quote Analyze your quote following the direct quotation
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DO • Be precise in your use of quotes • Make sure that your quote supports your thesis - your selected theme, in this case. • Introduce your quote • Analyze your quote following the direct quotation • Your analysis should be the majority of your paragraph
Things to Avoid • DO NOT start your paragraph with a quote (with the exclusion of your hook) • DO NOT end your paragraph with a quote • DO NOT have a quote that stands alone (is a sentence by itself) • DO NOT string together two quotes without analysis in between • DO NOT use a quote that is too long
Integrating quotes • Quotations should be integrated into your own sentences. Don’t let your quotes stand alone, without explanation nor introduction, You may use the author’s name to introduce the quote: • Shakespeare has noted, “… • Here are some signal words to introduce a quote: • Acknowledges Comments points out reports • Adds Compares maintains shows • Admits confirms notes states • Argues declares illustrates suggests • Asserts denies implies writes • Claims describes emphasizes insists
Analyzing quotes • After each quote, be sure to indicate why the quote is important and explain how it supports your thesis. • DO NOT summarize at this point. You are to operate under the assumption that your reader is familiar with the play. • Some questions to guide your analysis: • How does this quote work to support your thesis? • Who said this? In what context? • What purpose does it serve in this essay? • What does it mean?
MLA reminders • Cite each quote using the following format: • Shakespeare demonstrates Romeo’s dramatic nature early in the play when he is speaking to Benvolio, “This is not Romeo. He is not here, / he is some other where” (1.1.43). • Your parenthetical notation shows the (ACT.SCENE.LINES) • Include a Works Cited page • When using short quotations, place your period after the parenthetical notation. • Italicize the name of the play • Include your name, the subject, date, and the teacher’s name) on the first page • Create a clever, descriptive title
FINAL THINGS TO REMEMBER • DO NOT use “you” or “I” in your essay • Use transitions between paragraphs by starting the new paragraph with that bridge/transition. DO NOT END YOUR FIRST AND SECOND BODY PARAGRAPHS WITH ANYTHING BUT A CLINCHER SENTENCE. WE SAY GOODBY BEFORE WE SAY HELLO. • Your conclusion should leave the reader thinking about your essay. Be sure to note why the things that you wrote about are important to the world.