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Transitioning to high school. By David Morales & Raymundo Rios . Simile . Going into High is like going to an amusement park when you are tall enough to ride the rides because there is much more things to do. Simile 2.
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Transitioning to high school By David Morales & Raymundo Rios
Simile • Going into High is like going to an amusement park when you are tall enough to ride the rides because there is much more things to do
Simile 2 • High school is like going to a new country because It will take you some time to get to know the new place
Similes • Going to High School is as scary as going shark diving because anything can go wrong • Transitioning to High School is like a snake shedding it’s skin because you are leaving the old things behind and starting fresh
Metaphors • High School is an ocean waiting to be explored • Going to 9th grade is a jungle because you don’t know what to expect. http://writingday.wikispaces.com/file/view/Jungle.jpg/114509779/Jungle.jpg http://lifeboat.com/images/blue.ocean.jpg
David’s Metaphors • Going to high school is a puppy because it could be wild. • High school is a mountain because your trying to reach the top http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-qe5Dycq5sL8/TV1cpHMLUjI/AAAAAAAAAGw/-qKJfPFoHLc/s1600/maltese_running_puppy.21835131_std.jpg http://www.globetourguide.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/Mount-Everest-of-China.jpg
Onomatopoeia Nooooooooooooooo more hard work The teachers will go shhhhh when you talk much
Personification • High school gave me my paycheck • High school asked me about my feature
Onomatopoeia • Students will go hhhhuuuummmm if they are lost in the hallways. • Late students will zoom right through the hallways
Personification • High School will eat you alive Bad Grades will follow you for the rest of 9th grade
Alliteration • High School, High pressure , High Students, High Standards New Students, New teachers, New Friends, New Lockers
Alliteration • Teachers will use wise words. • Longer classes, longer halls, longer lockers, longer lines in the cafateria
Hyperbole • High School homework will have you stay up for a year. • High School will have you do a thousand things at a time.
Hyperbole • I will die if my friends are not in my classroom. • The new lockers will have to have to be deeper than a black hole.