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ELD Benchmark

ELD Benchmark. Essay Information. Essay Introduction. Goals of Introduction. Grab the reader’s attention Bridge Present sub-topics; forecast Present thesis; argument. Step #1 The Hook. Begin with a quote, A statistic, A brief anecdote, Opposing view, An analogy,

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ELD Benchmark

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  1. ELD Benchmark Essay Information

  2. Essay Introduction

  3. Goals of Introduction • Grab the reader’s attention • Bridge • Present sub-topics; forecast • Present thesis; argument

  4. Step #1 The Hook • Begin with a quote, • A statistic, • A brief anecdote, • Opposing view, • An analogy, • Relevant questions (not “Have you ever…”)

  5. Step #2 The Bridge • Connect hook to forecast • Meaning for hook • Why you choseit

  6. Step #3 Forecast • Preview subtopics • Brief details • Body paragraphs

  7. Step #4 Thesis • Thesis • One sentence • End of paragraph • Constant referral • Restate often

  8. Example

  9. Body Paragraphs

  10. Goals of Body Paragraphs • Introduce a subtopic • Present supporting details • Analyze details • Refer to thesis • Transition to next subtopic

  11. Goal #1 Introduce subtopic • Topic sentence • Subject of paragraph • Possible transition from previous paragraph

  12. Goal #2 Present Details • Lead-in and set-up data • Write author/title in sentence • Use data cards • Paraphrase • Summary • Direct quote • Citations

  13. Goal #3 Analyze details and refer back to thesis • Commentary or analysis • Connects detail (quotes/data) to thesis • Educated opinion

  14. Goal #4 Transition/Conclusion • Repeat details and your analysis as needed • Transition to next paragraph • Or conclude paragraph

  15. Sample Body Paragaph Format • Topic Sentence • Lead-in/Set-up then data (citation) • Student Analysis • Lead-in/Set-up then data (citation) • Student Analysis • Closing Sentence

  16. Conclusion Paragraphs

  17. Goals of Conclusion Paragraph • Paraphrase or restate thesis • Review or summarize main points • Make a final impression on reader

  18. Goal # 1 Thesis • Transition from previous paragraph • Do not use “In conclusion…” • Stress importance of thesis • Use different words

  19. Goal # 2 Review Main Points • Summarize body paragraphs • Brief, a few sentences • Don’t repeat introduction

  20. Goal # 3 Final Thoughts • Echo the introduction (anecdote) • Challenge reader • Call to action • Look to the future • Pose questions

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