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Notes. Simile. Comparing 2 things using like or as. Ex : Fred’s eyes are as blue as the sky on a cloudless winter morning. . Simile. Comparing 2 things using like or as. Ex : Fred’s eyes are like the sky on a cloudless winter morning. . Metaphor.
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Simile Comparing 2 things using like or as Ex: Fred’s eyes are as blue as the sky on a cloudless winter morning.
Simile Comparing 2 things using like or as Ex: Fred’s eyes are like the sky on a cloudless winter morning.
Metaphor A direct comparison of two unlike things Ex: That wave is a monster. Fred’s eyes are an early morning sky.
Create your own: Simile Metaphor A pencil is a(n)… A dog is like/as…
Alliteration The repetition of CONSONANT sounds in words that are close together. Ex: “…all summer in the sound of the sea” --Walt Whitman
ASSONANCE The repetition of VOWEL sounds in words that are close together. Ex:Try to light the fire.
Write a sentence for this picture using either alliteration or assonance (or both!):
Personification Giving human qualities to non-human things Ex: The darknessreached out to the campers. Fred’s goldfishbegged for more friends. The dayawoke in a splash of color.
Write a sentence using personification. The wind... The wind blew against the trunks, trying to hurl them into the raging, black waters of the Pacific.
Onomatopoeia Words that sound like what they are Tinkle Smash Burst Screech Clang
Hyperbole An extreme exaggeration Ex: I’m so hungry I could eat a horse! My backpack weighs a ton. Your teacher is so dumb, she took a ruler to bed to see how long she slept.
Symbolism An object that stands for an idea. Fairness Justice Balance of Power Equality
Allusion A reference, within a literary work, to another work of fiction, a film, a piece of art, or even a real event.
Allusion • "The girl's love of sweets was her Achilles heel," referencing the warrior in Greek mythology, Achilles, who could only be harmed if something hit his heel • "I am afraid of spiders, but I'm no Cowardly Lion!“ allusion to The Wizard of Oz
IMAGERY Language that appeals to the senses.
Show; Not Tell (How to write well and keep your readers interested)
Show; Not Tell Use vivid verbs scampered, bolted, whispered, clutched “Taboo” Verbs (use them sparingly!!) is are being was were been am be
Show; Not Tell She was walking to the store. She walked to the store. She hurried to the store. She strolled to the store. She tottered to the store.
Show; Not Tell Use specific nouns dog…..terrier student…eighth grader building…monument
Show; Not Tell Elizabeth, Ali, and Carol spent last Friday night over Amy’s house. At midnight they decided to grab some flashlights and play tag. Ali opened the front door. It creaked ominously. The four girls huddled together and peered past the safety of the entrance. Telling sentence: It was very dark outside.
A collective shudder ran through the group. It was as if the house balanced upon a bottomless pit. Carol whispered, “Flashlights.” Four laser-like beamsentered the blackness. Useless. The light barely pierced the doorway before it was eaten and swallowed by the night. Wordlessly, each girl switched off her flashlight and stepped slowly away from the door.
Now you will create a very short story. Choose a picture as inspiration. Your story must be an example of SHOW NOT TELL