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Unstoppable Bethany

Unstoppable Bethany. 2 nd Six Weeks Week 2 Assessment. Pre-Assessment Week 2: Ivana wrote this paper about a teenager she admires. Read Ivana’s paper and look for the corrections and improvements she should make. When you finish reading, answer the questions that follow.

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Unstoppable Bethany

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  1. Unstoppable Bethany 2nd Six Weeks Week 2 Assessment

  2. Pre-Assessment Week 2: Ivana wrote this paper about a teenager she admires. Read Ivana’s paper and look for the corrections and improvements she should make. When you finish reading, answer the questions that follow. 1. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 3? A. Since there are lots of surfers in Hawaii. You would probably recognize Bethany if you saw her. B. Even though there are lots of surfers in Hawaii, you would probably recognize Bethany if you saw Bethany. C. There are lots of surfers in Hawaii, you would probably recognize Bethany if you saw her. D. There are lots of surfers in Hawaii, but you would probably recognize Bethany if you saw her. 2. What transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 7? A. Instead B. Even worse C. Therefore D. In other words

  3. 3. Sentence 11 is missing the A. Subject B. Verb C. Punctuation D. There is no change needed. 4. Sentence 13 can BEST be improved by A. changing Bethany to she B. adding a comma after arm C. adding a comma after but D. make no change 5. What revision, if any, is needed in sentence 19? A. Bethany has a prosthetic arm now, but she doesn’t wear it much. B. Bethany has a prosthetic arm now, she doesn’t wear it much. C. Bethany has a prosthetic arm now but she doesn’t wear much. D. Bethany has a prosthetic arm now and she doesn’t wear it much.

  4. 6. What revision, if any, is needed in sentence 21? A. She can hold a soda bottle between her thighs and opening it with her right hand. B. She can hold a soda bottle between her thighs, she opens it with her right hand. C. She can hold a soda bottle between her thighs and opens it with her right hand. D. No revision is needed. 7. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 24? A. Change don’t to doesn’t B. Change waste to waist C. Change any to no D. Make no change 8. Sentence 5 is a result of A. Character vs. Self B. Character vs. Nature C. Character vs. Society

  5. 9. Why did Bethany respond to her prosthetic arm the way she did in paragraph 4? A. She wants to learn to do everything by herself- without any help. B. She hates the arm and doesn’t like to wear it. C. It hurts her elbow, so she refuses to wear it. D. People make fun of her when she wears it.

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