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Effective Communication in Technical Writing

Learn to improve your technical writing skills by avoiding common pitfalls in sentence structure and wording. Enhance clarity and professionalism in your writing.

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Effective Communication in Technical Writing

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  1. Exercise 3

  2. No.1 • (Worse) A good layout should not be determined by a singleperiod. • (Better) A single period should not determine a good layout

  3. No.2 • (Worse)Heuristics were included in this system to solve the dynamic layout problem. • (Better) This system included heuristics to solve the dynamic layout problem.

  4. No.3 • (Worse) Reduction of the number of states is attempted by a bounding procedure, but is not successful. • (Better) Although unsuccessful , a bounding procedure attempts to reduce the number of states.

  5. No.4 • (Worse) Consideration must be made of the two variables. • (Better) The two variables must be considered.

  6. No.5 • (Worse) In terms of cost savings, there is no significant difference between the control group and the experimental group. • (Better) The control group and the experimental group do not significantly differ in cost saving.

  7. No.6 • (Worse) Robust design was chosen to be the focus of this study owing to its importance during the past twenty years. • (Better) This study focused on robust design owning to its importance during the past two decades.

  8. No.7 • (Worse) There are many factors that affect product strategy. • (Better) Many factors affect product strategy.

  9. No.8 • (Worse) It is possible for the system to gather all unknown variables. • (Better) The system cam gather all unknown variables.

  10. No.9 • (Worse) The basic essentials of a successful trip are careful advance planning and future prediction of any unforeseeable circumstances. • (Better) The essentials of a successful trip are careful planning and prediction of any unforeseeable circumstances.

  11. No.10 • (Worse) The first priority in making a definite decision is that the group can reach a consensus of opinion. • (Better) The priority in making a decision is for the group to reach a consensus.

  12. No.11 • (Worse) It is necessary to recognize the increasingly prominent role of the Internet in our lives. • (Better) The increasingly prominent role of the Internet in our lives must be recognized.

  13. No.12 • (Worse)It is essential to identify parts with similar processing requirements. • (Better) Parts with similar processing requirements must be identified.

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