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How to polish your article

How to polish your article. 高考考纲对书面表达的要求. Criteria and requirements for NMET. 第五档 ( 很好 ) ； (25-30 分 ) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了 较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为 尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 ；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分， 使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。. 1. 使用较高级的词汇.

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  1. How to polish your article

  2. 高考考纲对书面表达的要求 Criteria and requirements for NMET. 第五档(很好)；(25-30分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

  3. 1. 使用较高级的词汇 2. 使用较丰富的句式 策略 3. 使用恰当的连接词 增强书面表达效果的策略 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。

  4. 1. 较高级词汇 Tip1. 多实少虚 : nice generous, interesting, humorous, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable….

  5. 1. 较高级词汇 Tip2. 短语/习语优先： I cannot put up with it. I cannot bear it. I want it. I have a strong desire for it.

  6. 巧用习语---增加文采 • In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. • You can find my house easily. • Many houses are being built. (under +N.) Our school consists of twenty–six classrooms. You’ll have no troublein finding my house. Many houses are under construction.

  7. 1. 较高级词汇 TiP３弃旧取新(尽可能使用高中词汇）: Ｗe all have the same chance. There are more opponents. possess opportunity exist

  8. careful--- cautious so--- therefore clearly --- apparently /obviously throw away--- abandon be important --- count/matter refuse to listen – turn a deaf ear to …

  9. 1. 较高级词汇 • Tip4．避免重复 • 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 • I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. • →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. I will try my best not to let them down. I will make every effort to live up to their expectations.

  10. 1. 较高级词汇 firmly • Tip5 巧用副词及插入语 • Therefore, I ______ believe that our future is in our own hands. • _______, farming on this bad land is a struggle against nature.(明显的） • I _____ advocate that all of us should learn from him and always be ready to help others. • They, _______, didn’t accept it. （然而） Obviously strongly however

  11. 1. 较高级词汇 Ⅰ.用较高级词汇代替画波浪线部分的词或短语 1．The bookshop is in a building on Franco Street. _________ 2．I have decided to study English harder this term.________ 3．I don't know how to enlarge my vocabulary.____________ lies made up my mind have no idea

  12. 4．We'll try our best to develop the traditional friendship • between us.____________ • 5．The boyrealizedthe danger and began to run away. • →The boy was aware of the danger and began to run away. • spare no effort/make every effort

  13. More exercises: 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable. Owing to/Due to We all think highly of him . We all regard him as great man. A good idea occurred to me. A good idea flashed across my mind. A good idea suddenly struck/hit me.

  14. 倒 装 虚 拟 等 等 非 谓 语 各种从句 2. 丰富的句式（语法结构） with复合结构 独立主格 强调句型 运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。

  15. 丰富的句式 1.When we arrived at the company, we were shown around the workshops first.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用with结构) （When）arriving at the company, We were shown around the workshops first. What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things. He came in , with a baby in his arms.

  16. 丰富的句式 4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） 5. He did not come to the party because he was very busy. (使用强调句型) 6. We can live in harmony with nature in this way.( 使用倒装） ，he can’t get in touch with Mary. Not knowing his telephone number It was because he was very busy that he didn’t come to the party. Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.

  17. 丰富的句式 7.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 8. When he spoke more, he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构） by many students, she walked out of the lab. Followed The more the more he spoke, excited he felt.

  18. 3. 恰当的连接词 一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。(三维p279)

  19. 三、怎样使用恰当的连接词

  20. 恰当的连接词（exercise） 一.补充句子 • 根据中文意思，将下列英文句子补充完整。 1.你给了我许多帮助，也给了我许多鼓舞。总之，没有你我不能成功。 • You gave me much help and encouragement. ___ ___ ____, I couldn’t have succeeded without you. • 2.一般说来物理比数学难学得多。 • , physics is much more difficult than mathematics. In a word Generally speaking

  21. 恰当的连接词（exercise） To m y satisfaction • 3.令我满意的是，他数学考试得了满分。 • ___ ____ _____ , he got full marks in the mathematics exam. • 4.令我惊恐的是， 我看见他从树上摔了下来。 • ____ ____ ______, I saw him fall down from the tree. • 5.这辆自行车真的很漂亮，然而我没钱买。 • This bike is really very beautiful. ——————, I have no money to buy it. To my horror However 6.All the school-age children can study here. What’s more, they enjoy free education in it.

  22. Tips： 正确恰当地使用名言、谚语

  23. 1.Speech is silver, silence is gold. 2.Easier said than done. 3.Honesty is the best policy. 4.One man’s meat is another man’s poison. 5.Love me, love my dog. 6.Seeing is believing. 7.Well began is half done. 8.When in Rome, do as Romans do. 9.Where there is a will, there is a way. 10.No pains, no gains. 11.Strike while the iron is hot. 12.There is no smoke without fire

  24. . 13.It’s never too late to mend. 14.Knowledge is power. 15.Practice makes perfect. 16.All roads lead to Rome. 17.Many hands make light work. 18.God helps those who help themselves. 19.Nothing is impossible for a willing heart. 20.Rome was not built in a day. 21.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 22.Look before you leap. 23.It is hard to please all. 24.No cross，no crown.

  25. 扬 文 让 书 面 表 达 飞 采 语意要合情合理，过渡自然 语句要有简有繁，随“意”而安 语法要结构正确，无懈可击 语言要地道流畅，书写规范

  26. 高考书面表达欣赏2012浙江卷： • 你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句（quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文： • 1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； • 2.举例说明理由。 • 注意：短文的开头已给出（不计词数） • In the English Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this ：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.’’

  27. In the English Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this ：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.’’ I can’t agree more with it .Obviously, we can get a wonderful future with the help of our parents and or friends. Also, the opportunity we meet have a significant effect on our life.

  28. However, as the saying goes‘ ‘No cross, no crown”, our future depends mostly on ourselves. Looking back, once I had trouble in learning history. Although the teachers helped me a lot , my grades couldn’t be improved. Therefore, I had to practise constantly. To my surprise, I made great progress in the final exam. As we can see, the more effort we make to achieve our goals, the more we will gain. Young as we are, we can manage to do things well. • In a word, we are the key to success. It is high time that we enhance our abilities.

  29. Homework: • Write a composition .(镇海中学模拟卷）

  30. Thank you

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