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Scientists are researching ways to enhance the human senses, and they need your input. In this essay, we explore the benefits of incorporating a hawk's strong sense of sight into humans. By leveraging a hawk's exceptional vision, humans could improve their driving skills, become more aware of their surroundings, and anticipate potential dangers. Discover how this advancement could revolutionize human perception and enhance safety in various aspects of life.
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English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses Essay Question Korean scientists are working on improving one of the senses of humans, but they can only choose one. They need your help. Write a paragraph or two describing an animal sense that scientists should use to improve humans.
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Which human sense • should be improved? • touch • taste • hearing • sight • smell
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Snake • strong sense of • touch • this is the most • highly developed • of their senses • can feel the • slightest change • around them
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Octopus • strong sense of • taste • their tentacles are • covered with • millions of taste • buds
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Bat • strong sense of • hearing • eyesight in very bad • they sense things around • them with their hearing • can hear things a • human cannot • their sense of • hearing is thirty • times better than • a human’s hearing
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Hawk • strong sense of • sight • best in the world • their sense of • sight is eight • times better than • a human’s sight • they can see a • mouse from 1.6 • kilometers away
English Vine Presentation Program • NI I Unit 4 Senses • Dog • strong sense of • smell • is one thousand (1,000) • times more sensitive • than a human’s sense • of smell • are used to locate • bodies, both dead & • alive
Model Answer Writing I think it is difficult to just choose one. However, if I had to choose only one, I would choose a hawk’s strong sense of sight. A hawk has the best sense of sight in the world. A hawk’s sense of sight is eight times better than a human’s. I think this could benefit humans very much. If a human had a hawk’s sense of sight, it could help them be better drivers. I don’t think there would be as many car accidents. I think people would be more aware of what is around them. Also, people would be able to see cars better when they are walking. I also think that people would be able to see danger coming toward them. Then, they would be able to avoid it. So, if I had to choose only one sense, I would choose a hawk’s strong sense of sight.