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Front cover • The name of the magazine was good and the name of the suited the style of magazine. • The use of colour was good. • Thought that the front cover looked professional.
However changes could be made. • The title of Poptastic could be made bigger. • The cover lines could lose the coloured background behind the cover line.
Contents page • The use of colour on the page is good, maybe just a little bit to bright. • The contents information suites the magazine that has been create. • The Photographs look good for the magazine that has been created.
However changes could be made. • The writing in the contents needs to be change because it is difficult to read. • Need to add two more Photographs, to file the space in the middle up. Move the photographs, so that I can create room for two more photographs. • Write when you can subscribe to the magazine in the space in the contents information. • Maybe make the texted bigger, so that it is easy to read.
Double page spread • Like the fact that I have used a white background behind the coloured text. • Like the Idea that I have used a different colour for each person in the group.
However changes could be made. • Maybe I could make the main photograph bigger on the page.