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Optimal Exercise for Athletes

Athletes must prioritize exercise to maintain peak shape and performance. It is crucial for their success and overall well-being. Neglecting exercise can hinder their abilities and potential in their respective sports.

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Optimal Exercise for Athletes

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  1. Exercise 18

  2. No.1 • (Worse) To keep in shape, exercise is a must for an athlete. • (Better) An athlete must exercise to keep in shape.

  3. No.2 • (Worse) When an engineer, customer satisfaction should be attempted. • (Better) An engineer should attempt to satisfy the customer.

  4. No.3 • (Worse) After simulating a real environment, a consensus was reached. • (Better) After the researchers simulated a real environment, a consensus was reached.

  5. No.4 • (Worse) Being radioactive, the technician handled the materials with extreme care. • (Better) The technician handled the radioactive materials with extreme care.

  6. No.5 • (Worse) Several investigations calibrated errors related to camera distortion, which occurred in the 1990’s. • (Better) Several investigations during the 1990’s calibrated errors related to camera distortion.

  7. No.6 • (Worse) The pedestrian warned the passing car with an angry look. • (Better) The pedestrian with an angry look warned the passing car.

  8. [Note 5.5] • It is illogical to state that the passing car has an angry look. • The revised sentence eliminates the confusion.

  9. No.7 • (Worse) The cellular manufacturing system has been increasingly applied to industry, which is an important group technology application. • (Better) The cellular manufacturing system, an important group technology application, has been increasingly applied to industry.

  10. No.8 • (Worse) A genetic algorithm is appropriate for the machine-component grouping problem which is a robust adaptive optimization method based on principles of natural evolution. • (Better) Genetic algorithm, a robust adaptive optimization method based on principles of natural evolution, is appropriate for the machine-component grouping problem.

  11. [Note 5.6] • In this sentence, a robust adaptive optimization method illogically refers to the machine-component grouping problem, implying that the modifying clause has been misplaced. • The revised sentence places the clause next to subject that it modifies.

  12. No.9 • (Worse) To encourage adult literacy, public reading rooms have been established in the city. • (Better 1) To encourage adult literacy, the government has established public reading rooms in the city. • (Better 2) The government has established public reading rooms in the city to encourage adult literacy.

  13. No.10 • (Worse) When logging onto the Internet, complicated programming tasks are unnecessary. • (Better 1) Complicated programming tasks are unnecessary when logging onto the Internet. • (Better 2) Logging onto the Internet does not require complicated programming tasks.

  14. No.11 • (Worse) As a child, my mother encouraged me to read many books. • (Better) My mother encouraged me to read many books when I was a child.

  15. No.12 • (Worse) Entering the apartment, the light had been left on. • (Better) Entering the apartment, I notice that the light had been left on.

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