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English 9 Mr. Rinka - Lesson #47. Writing a Paragraph Steps 5 & 6 The Call of the Wild Analysis – Chapters 1, 2, 3. Writing a Paragraph. Assignment: Write a paragraph that answers the question “What daily activity is good for the mind, body, and soul?”. The Writing Process.
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English 9Mr. Rinka - Lesson #47 Writing a Paragraph Steps 5 & 6 The Call of the Wild Analysis – Chapters 1, 2, 3
Writing a Paragraph Assignment: Write a paragraph that answers the question “What daily activity is good for the mind, body, and soul?”
The Writing Process Step #1 = Prewrite Step #2 = Rough Draft Step #3 = Reread & Share Step #4 = Revise Step #5 = Edit Step #6 = Final Draft
Step #4 = Revise Bicycling is not only a reliable and inexpensive form of transportation, but as a daily activity it is good for the mind, body, and soul. Cycling is a low impact activity that benefits all physical systems. While exercising the heart and lungs, a cyclist also strengthens his leg, arm, back and shoulder muscles. Free to go any where and at the any pace, a cyclist’s mind is always stimulated with new experiences. An ever changing landscape offers a variety of sights, sounds, and smells to the rider. Spending time
Step #4 = Revise with oneself on a bicycle is very good for the soul. Given this peaceful opportunity to reflect, observe and feel, a rider becomes introspective. Cycling is that rare activity we can do for life that benefits ever aspect of ourselves, the body, mind and soul.
Step #6 = Step #5 = Edit Bicycling is not only a reliable and inexpensive form of transportation, but as a daily activity it is good for the mind, body, and soul. Bicycling is not only a reliable and inexpensive form of transportation, but also, as a daily activity cycling is healthy for the body, mind, and soul.
Step #6 = Step #5 = Edit Cyclingis a low impact activity that benefits all physical systems. While exercising the heart and lungs, a cyclist also strengthens his leg, arm, back and shoulder muscles. Bike riding has little impact on the body, yet it benefits all physical systems. While exercising the heart and lungs, a cyclist also strengthens his leg, arm, back and shoulder muscles.
Step #6 = Step #5 = Edit Free to go any where and at the any pace, a cyclist’s mind is always stimulated with new experiences. An ever changing landscape offers a variety of sights, sounds, and smells to the rider. Free to go anywhere and at the any pace, a cyclist stimulates his mind with new experiences. An ever changing landscape offers a variety of sights, sounds, and smells to the rider.
Step #6 = Step #5 = Edit Spending time with oneself on a bicycle is very good for the soul. Given this peaceful opportunity to reflect, observe and feel, a rider becomes introspective. Spending time with oneself on a bicycle enriches the soul. With this peaceful opportunity to observe thoughts and feelings, a rider becomes introspective.
Step #6 = Step #5 = Edit Cycling is that rare activity we can do for life that benefits ever aspect of ourselves, the body, mind and soul. Bicycling is that rare activity we can do for life that benefits every aspect of ourselves, the body, mind and soul.
Step #6 = Final Draft Bicycling is not only a reliable and inexpensive form of transportation, but also, as a daily activity cycling is healthy for the body, mind, and soul. Bike riding has little impact on the body, yet it benefits all physical systems. While exercising the heart and lungs, a cyclist also strengthens his leg, arm, back and shoulder muscles. Free to go anywhere and at the any pace, a cyclist stimulates his mind with new experiences. An ever changing landscape offers a variety of sights, sounds, and smells to the rider. Spending time with oneself on a
Step #6 = Final Draft bicycle enriches the soul. With this peaceful opportunity to observe thoughts and feelings, a rider becomes introspective. Bicycling is that rare activity we can do for life that benefits every aspect of ourselves, the body, mind and soul.
The Call of the Wild Analysis – Chapters 1, 2, 3http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf By Jack London http://london.sonoma.edu/
Jack London’s Stylehttp://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf London’s writing style is called “Naturalistic.” Naturalism is a writing style that presents reality as it is. Often Naturalism depicts the harshness of life with much action. London writes about the conflicts of life: man v man, man v nature, and man v self. London illustrates the philosophy of the “survival of the fittest.”
Questions - The Call of the Wild Ch. 1 “Into the Primitive”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf What’s the significance of the chapter’s title? What significant lesson did Buck learn from his encounter with the man and his club? Why do you think London started this story with Buck being a domestic dog?
What’s the significance of the chapter’s title? Foreshadows what is to come. Eludes to a transition. “Primitive” is a key word that prevails throughout the novel.
What significant lesson did Buck learn from his encounter with the man and his club? Man is to be feared if he has a weapon. Buck must respect powers that can overwhelm him. Buck needs to adapt and change those things he has control over.
Why do you think London started this story with Buck being a domestic dog? The reader is familiar with domestic dogs. The challenge of the transition for Buck is made obvious to the reader. The point of the story is served by it.
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 1 “Into the Primitive”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “He did not know why, but he felt oppressed by the vague sense of impending calamity.” “And Buck was truly a red-eyed devil, as he drew himself together for the spring, hair bristling, mouth foaming, a madglitter in his bloodshot eyes.” “In midair, just as his jaws were about to close on the man, he received a shock that checked his body and brought his teeth together with an agonizing clip.”
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 1 “Into the Primitive”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “Perrault knew dogs, and when he looked at Buck he knew that he was one in a thousand.” “He was friendly, in a treacherous sort of way, smiling into one’s face the while he meditated some underhanded trick, as, for instance, when he stole from Buck’s food at the first meal.”
Questions - The Call of the WildCh. 2 “The Law of Club and Fang”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf What are the “law of club and fang?” What makes these laws so different from Buck’s background? What qualities do Buck possess that assure he will succeed in the wild? Why do these dogs love to pull a sled?
What are the “law of club and fang?” What makes these laws so different from Buck’s background? Man ruled with the club. Dogs ruled with their fangs. Take the club away, and man is no threat. Buck needed to rule with his fangs. Never had to do this before.
What qualities do Buck possess that assure he will succeed in the wild? Because of his breed he is bigger, heavier and stronger. He has more diverse experiences. He has an inner instinct about how to survive.
Why do these dogs love to pull a sled? Bred to pull sleds. Conditioned to pull sleds. Never knew anything else.
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 2 “The Law of Club and Fang”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “All was confusion and action, and every moment life and limb were in peril. There was imperative need to be constantly alert; for these dogs and men were not town dogs and men. They were savages, all of them, who knew no law but the law of club and fang.” “No fair play. Once down, that was the end of you.”
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 2 “The Law of Club and Fang”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “He did not steal for joy of it, but because of the clamor of his stomach.” “Thus, as token of what a puppet thing life is, the ancient song surged through him and he came into his own again; and he came because men had found a yellow metal in the North, and because Manuel was a gardener’s helper whose wages did not lap over the needs of his wife and divers small copies of himself.”
Questions - The Call of the WildCh. 3 “The Dominant Primordial Beast”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf What are the most important qualities that Buck has that help him survive in this environment? Why do you think there is so much violence in this story, and is it justified?
What are the most important qualities that Buck has that help him survive in this environment? His physical makeup. He intelligence. His perceptions. His inherent instincts.
Why do you think there is so much violence in this story, and is it justified? In the wild, survival demands physical strength and violent response to predators or challengers. Violence in a violent environment is justified for survival. Nonviolence in the wild leads to death.
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 3 “The Dominant Primordial Beast”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “Then he was a masterful dog, and what made him dangerous was the fact that the club of the man in the red sweater had knocked all blind puck and rashness out of his desire for mastery.”
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 3 “The Dominant Primordial Beast”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “All that stirring of old instincts which at stated periods drives men out from the sounding cities to forest and plain to kill things by chemically propelled leaden pellets, the blood lust, the joy to kill—all this was Buck’s, only it was infinitely more intimate. He was ranging at the head of the pack, running the wild thing down, the living meat, to kill with his own teeth and wash his muzzle to the eyes in warm blood.”
Quotations - The Call of the WildCh. 3 “The Dominant Primordial Beast”http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf “There is an ecstasy that marks the summit of life, and beyond which life cannot rise. And such is the paradox of living, this ecstasy comes when one is most alive, and it comes as a complete forgetfulness that one is alive.”
The Writing Process Step #1 = Prewrite Step #2 = Rough Draft Step #3 = Reread & Share Step #4 = Revise Step #5 = Edit Step #6 = Final Draft
The Call of the Wild Analysis – Chapters 1, 2, 3http://us.penguingroup.com/static/pdf/teachersguides/callwild.pdf By Jack London http://london.sonoma.edu/