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Genderally speaking. As a girl, I don’t understand why…. Guys tease us when they “like” us. Guys like to play video games…all day! Guys won’t admit they are concerned about how they look. Men dominate the business world. Sports dominate the conversations boys have.
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As a girl, I don’t understand why…. • Guys tease us when they “like” us. • Guys like to play video games…all day! • Guys won’t admit they are concerned about how they look. • Men dominate the business world. • Sports dominate the conversations boys have. • Guys can get over relationships much faster than girls. • Guys don’t take the time to appreciate how much effort girls put into looking good. • Food is more important. • Guys like to blow things up. • Guys hit and punch for fun.
As a Guy, I don’t understand why girls… • Put so much effort into looks. • Expect guys to know what they are thinking. • Cry. • Gossip and then get hurt when others gossip about them. • Dwell on the past. • Are moody. • Hold grudges. • Never give a straight answer. • Can shop for so long. • Travel in packs. • Are always right.
But We love guys because… • They are straightforward. • They balance out the world. • They make us laugh. • They “have our back.” • Adventure!
And Guys love women because… • They are complex. • They listen. • They actually can share their emotions. • They are better friends. • Looks, looks, looks. • They cheer for us at sporting events (??). • They make babies (again…???). • They are sensitive.
Stellar Topic sentences • “When I was about eight years old, I discovered that not all people are the same.” • “Sharing a roof with a brother, make cat and a dad should make me know a few things about the opposite sex, right? Wrong.” • “Girls are a bother over half the time we are with them.” • Girls can be considered to be the 8th wonder of the world.
Excellent Context • Whenever I am anywhere close to a boy’s room, I wanna puke and while I’m puking all’s they wanna do is play video games. • Most guys can be rowdy one day and quiet the next. It confuses me that they alternate between the two.
Amazing Concrete details… • I feel girls talk more because women’s brains are 30% more active than guys. • As a girl it became my civic duty to care about girly things, like how my hair looked, if my nails were an obnoxious shade of pink and knowing the names of important male celebrities like Leonardo Dicrapio or Brad Pitt. • Girls could be said to be like packs of wolves, they’re always in groups and one wrong step (or misinterpreted comment about a girls shoes) sends them into a frenzy.
Sensational Commentary • A lot of people judge others on their gender while I personally believe it depends on how the person is raised. • Girls also appreciate having guy friends because they start less drama than girls. These experiences show that even though girls “hate” guys, they learn to have fun with them and love them.
Frequent “issues” • Homonyms • YOU • I am going to talk/write… • Lack of commentary • Paragraphs jumping from one topic to the next. • Specific concrete details • Stuff • Things