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AVOIDING ILLOGICAL SHIFTS

AVOIDING ILLOGICAL SHIFTS. A shift is a sudden, unexpected change in person or number ( pronoun ) verb tense voice mood AND HOW TO CORRECT THEM. In a shift in person,.

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AVOIDING ILLOGICAL SHIFTS

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  1. AVOIDING ILLOGICAL SHIFTS A shift is a sudden, unexpected change in person or number(pronoun) verb tense voice mood AND HOW TO CORRECT THEM

  2. In a shift in person, • the references to yourself, your audience, or the people you are writing about are inconsistent. Pay special attention to pronouns. • EXAMPLE: • When people study a foreign language, you also learn about another culture.

  3. How to correct it: • When people study a foreign language, youthey also learn about another culture. • Refer to yourself, your audience, and the people you are writing about in a consistent way. • If you begin with a pronoun in first, second, or third person, change any inconsistent pronouns to match.

  4. In a shift in verb tense, • the verb tenses are inconsistent when the meaning of the sentence does not require you to change tenses. • EXAMPLE: • The virus mutated so quickly that it develops a resistance to most vaccines. • (The verb tense shifts from past to present.)

  5. In a shift in verb tense, • Notice that sometimes the meaning requires you to change verb tenses in a sentence. The following sentence is correct because the meaning requires a change in verb tense: • EXAMPLE: • Last spring, robins built the nest that the blue jays now call home.

  6. How to correct it: • The virus mutatedmutates so quickly that it develops a resistance to most vaccines. • Maintain consistency in verb tense throughout a paragraph or essay, unless the meaning requires you to change tenses. • Change any inconsistent tenses to match the appropriate time frame.

  7. In a shift in voice, • the writer needlessly uses both the active and the passive voice, which results in disorienting and wordy sentences. • EXAMPLE: • One group of volunteers was given a placebo, and the researchers treated another group with the new drug. • (The first clause is in the passive voice, and the second clause is in the active voice.)

  8. How to correct it: • One group of volunteers was given a placebo, and/ The researchers gave one group of volunteers a placebo, and the researchers treated another group with the new drug. • Use a consistent voice. • To change a sentence from the passive voice to the active voice, make the subject of the sentence the performer of the action.

  9. A shift in mood • occurs when the writer moves among commands or directions; statements or questions; and wishes, suggestions, or conditions contrary to fact. • Keep your goal in mind, and you need to practice, practice, practice. • (The first clause is a direction, and the second is a statement.)

  10. How to correct it: • Keep your goal in mind, and you need to practice, practice, practice. • Use a consistent mood throughout a paragraph or an essay.

  11. Mood Mood reveals the writer's intentions and attitude, which affects the tone of the paper. Indicative Imperative Subjunctive or Conditional

  12. Indicative mood makes a statement, delineates a fact or opinion, or asks a question. • Incorrect:  • The stars are creating light from hydrogen, helium and other elements that ignite in a nuclear reaction that can be seen in the night sky. • Correct: • The stars are twinkling in the sky.

  13. Imperative mood gives a command, offers advice, or makes a request. • Incorrect:  • "Bring the papers to my office and will you place them on my desk?" • Correct: • "Bring the papers to my office, and place them on the desk."

  14. Subjunctive, or conditional, mood expresses a wish, hypothesis, suggestion, condition contrary to fact, or requirement. • Incorrect: • If I was president, I would introduce a new economic policy. • Correct: • If I were president, I would introduce a new economic policy.

  15. → It is possible and also very likely that the condition will be fulfilled. • Form:if + Simple Present, will-Future • Example: If I find her address, I’ll send her an invitation.

  16. → It is possible but very unlikely, that the condition will be fulfilled. • Form:if + Simple Past, Conditional I (= would + Infinitive) • Example: If I found her address, I would send her an invitation.

  17. → It is impossible that the condition will be fulfilled because it refers to the past. • Form:if + Past Perfect, Conditional II (= would + have + Past Participle) • Example: If I had found her address, I would have sent her an invitation.

  18. Sources: • a handout by Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010. • Hughes, Neil. (Feb. 1993). Handouts about Revision. jms2013

  19. She was shocked when she hears the news. •  Anne will sing tomorrow night, exactly five days after she confirmed the rumors. • If one practices before a performance, you will decrease the chance of committing a mistake. • We rode a train to the theater, then we were given a ride by our friend on our way home. • If a government official finds themselves in a controversy, he should settle the matter. • When one watches such a great movie, you will have a sense of satisfaction. • One should sift the flour before they make the pie. • Ping made the plans for the project, and the program was also continued. • Laila delivered the products, inspected the damage, and had written a report. • Open the lid and then alcohol should be used to clean the parts.

  20. The dog walks to the table. Then, he circled it and sits in front of the television. • When Janet became the president of the organization, she is the first woman to hold that title in the government. • Last year, she was a rich woman. Now, she is a convicted felon. • The soldiers were told that you had to stay in the camp. • Anyone can learn to play an instrument if you practice. • Each visitor to the exhibit should surrender their gadgets at the entrance. • After the police finished the investigation, a report was submitted about their findings. • If the people had actually seen what happened, they would have been shocked. • That cat would bite you if you pick her up.

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