2月22日托福写作考前点题黄舒文

2月22日托福写作考前点题 黄舒文

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三选一题型 • Which do you think is the best way for students to make friends? • a. join a sports team • b. participate in community activities • c. travel

version-1 一边倒 • I think the best way to make friends is to join a sports team. • First and foremost, joining a sports team allows students to make friends with those who share the same interest in sports. • Second, people can detect the strengths and weaknesses of each other when playing sports and thus decide who they would like to befriend. • Finally, physical and mental fitness can be achieved by the company of friends in a sports team.

version-1 一边倒 • 优点 • 5段，每段字数要求不高 • 传统写法，较有说服力 • 缺点 • 时间短，分论点难想，耽误时间

version-2 • 1. introduction • 2. Joining a sports team is the best way to make friends. • benefit (1),,,benefit (2),,, • 3. Although community activities and traveling are far from bad, they have some inevitable disadvantages. • 4. conclusion

version-3 分情况讨论 • All the three options can be the best, and it depends on different groups of people. • For students who enjoy playing the sports, joining the sports team is the best way to make friends. • For students who like to befriend people at different age, participating in the community activities is the most favorable choice. • For students who want to know some foreign friends, they can turn to traveling for enlarging their friend circle.

三选一题目的解法 • 方法一 • 一边倒，选择A/B/C其中一个进行拓展，一般写3个分论点，2个亦可 • 方法二 • 选择一个写其好处，另一段写剩下二个的弊端 • 方法三 • 分情况讨论，三个都能写

对比型题目 • People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them. (A>B) • version-1一边倒 three problems that only the government is capable of solving: • e.g. law; public transportation; politics; natural disaster; war...

对比型题目 • People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there’s no need for the government to help them. (A>B) • version-2让步转折，分情况讨论 It depends on what kind of problems people are dealing with. • 让步A>B, especially when it comes to personal issues like career, marriage or school. • 转折B>A, especially in terms of law and public transportation individuals are unable to resolve independently.

对比型题目 • It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose. (A>B) • version-1一边倒 • 3 benefits of a secure job • OR: 3 benefits of an unstable job

对比型题目 • It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose. (A>B) • version-2分年龄讨论 • Admittedly, taking a secure job with a low pay is a better choice than a well-paid job that is easy to lose, especially for senior employees who ususally seek a stable career. (A>B，espeically for...) • However, for young workers in pursuit of more wealth, doing a job that offers high salaries but is easy to lose proves a more favorable decision. (B>A, especially for...)

对比型题目 • Your job has greater happiness than your social life. (A>B) • version-1一边倒 • 工作的三个好处 • 或者：社交生活的三个好处

对比型题目 • Your job has greater happiness than your social life. (A>B) • version-2分情况讨论 • 让步：物质满足和精神成就感方面，工作>社交 • 转折：解压、娱乐层面看，社交>工作

对比型题目 • People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.(A>B) • version-1一边倒 • 多项技能的三个好处 • 或者：单项技能的三个好处

对比型题目 • People who have learned many different skills are more likely to succeed than those who focus on learning only one skill.(A>B) • version-2分不同的职业需求 • 让步：more skills are better than one skill in some territories • e.g. simultaneous interpreters同声传译，foreign language/professional knowledge/communication/fast learning/physically capable to cope with the pressure • 转折：one skill is enough in some fields • e.g. athletes/cooks/artists/...

对比型题目 • It is more important for the government to spend money on new buildings than to preserve historic or traditional buildings and homes. • It is more important for the government to spend money on improving Internet access than on public transportation. • Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development. • The telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has. • Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.

对比型题目 • Should the government support artists or should artists support themselves? (A or B，解法同A>B) • 分情况讨论分国家 • Developed countries should support artists. • In developing countries artists should support themselves because the government needs to focus on the basic living of citizens in terms of food, clothing, shelter, education and medical services.

今昔对比题目 • Teaching is harder today than it was in the past. • 1.一边倒，倒现在 • 2.一边倒，倒过去 • 3.A=B 现在和过去教书都很难 • 4.A=B 现在和过去教书都很简单

今昔对比题目 • Young people are less dependent on their parents today than in the past. • Nowadays young people do not respect their teachers as much as they did in the past. • Teachers in the past had a greater influence on their students than teachers do today.

隐藏all题目 • In twenty years’ time, people will lead a more leisurely life. （分年龄） • The effective leader tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision. • In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.

隐藏all题目 • Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished. • Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes. • Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid. • The environmental issue is too complex to be handled by the individual. • Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.

Good luck with tomorrow!

2月22日托福写作考前点题黄舒文