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Combining Sentences. Also referred to as simple sentences Contain the most basic elements needed to make a sentence. Contain a subject and a verb . Forms a complete thought Examples: Rachel plays soccer. My cat scratches the furniture. Jacob jumps around. Independent Clauses.
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Also referred to as simple sentences • Contain the most basic elements needed to make a sentence. • Contain a subjectand a verb. • Forms a complete thought • Examples: • Rachel plays soccer. • My cat scratches the furniture. • Jacob jumps around. Independent Clauses
a dependent clause lacks either a subject or a verb and does not form a complete thought. • Examples of dependent clauses: • Because she plays soccer • although he is crazy • Even though she is very loveable • Dependent clauses begin with a subordinating conjunction (next slide) Dependent Clauses
After Although As Because Before Even though If Since Though Unless Until When Whenever Whereas Wherever while Subordinating Conjunctions
A sentence made up of two independent clauses (two complete sentences) • They are connected to one another using a coordinating conjunction (FANBOY) • For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So • Examples: • Rachel plays soccer, and she plays the violin. • My cat scratches the furniture, but I don’t care. • Jacob jumps around, for he is crazy. • PUNCTUATION NOTE: you must insert a comma in front of the coordinating conjunction (FANBOY) Compound Sentences
A sentence made up of one independent clause and one or more dependent clause. • A complex sentence joins an independent clause with one or more dependent clauses using a subordinating conjunction. • Examples: • Because she plays soccer, Rachel doesn’t have time to practice her violin. • Although he is crazy, the teacher loves him anyway. • Even though she is loveable, the cat is getting on my nerves. • Rachel doesn’t have time to practice her violin because she plays soccer. Complex Sentences
Punctuating complex sentences can be tricky. Use the following guidelines. • When the dependent clause comes first, a comma should be used to separate the two clauses. • Examples: • Because she plays soccer, Rachel doesn’t have time to practice her violin. When the independent clause comes first you do not need to put a comma before the subordinating conjunction. • Rachel doesn’t have time to practice her violin because she plays soccer. Complex Sentences
A compound-complex sentence is one that has two or more independent clauses and one or more subordinate clauses. • Examples: • Because they love extracurricular activities, Rachel plays soccer, and Danielle plays the violin. • My cat is loveable, and she is friendly until the dog wakes up. Compound-Complex Sentences
An appositive is a noun or pronoun — often with modifiers — set beside another noun or pronoun to explain or identify it. Here are some examples of appositives (the noun or pronoun will be in green,the appositive will be in red). • Mrs. Simmons, my favorite teacher, knows we are involved in a lot of activities, so she doesn’t assign homework over the weekend. • My favorite teacher, Mrs. Simmons, doesn’t assign homework over the weekend because she knows we are involved in a lot of activities. • Amanda, a student in my Honors class, is a gifted writer. • The Geico spokesman, a gecko, has a very cultured British accent. • The creator of Family Guy, Seth MacFarlane, is a genius. Appositives
Combine the following independent clauses two different ways. In parentheses, identify what type of sentence it is (compound, complex, compound-complex). • My teacher doesn’t assign homework over the weekend. • My teacher knows we are involved in a lot of activities • She is my favorite teacher. • Her name is Mrs. Simmons Exit Ticket
Peer Editing Feedback Suggestions for evaluating a classmate’s work
I like your use of the word(s) because… • Your sentence structure is interesting because you • I would really like to know • I am unclear about • Your use of figurative language here is effective because • One thing you did really good here is • One thing you might want to consider doing is Sentence Starters
Effective Ineffective You forgot to add a period Your sentences are nice I find your voice very interesting. I like how you used your sentences. I like the words you used. Your imagery is great I like the creative words. Your handwriting is a lot better than mine. I like your name. • I like how you used short, simple sentences to create emphasis. • Your use of similes really helped me visualize what you were talking about. • One thing you might want to consider is to use more of a variety of complex and simple sentences. • Your use of figurative language really makes this enjoyable to read. • You provided a lot of good details in your piece. • You may want to use more descriptive words to make your writing sound more sophisticated. Sample Editing Comments