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Integrated English Writing

Integrated English Writing. Attendance Please raise your hand and say “HERE!”. Find the 10 writing errors with your partner To: reservations@hiltonhotel.com From: hyorilee@awesome.com Subject: Hotel Reservation Dear Hilton hotel

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Integrated English Writing

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  1. Integrated English Writing

  2. Attendance Please raise your hand and say “HERE!”

  3. Find the 10 writing errors with your partner • To: reservations@hiltonhotel.com • From: hyorilee@awesome.com • Subject: Hotel Reservation • Dear Hilton hotel • I read about your hotel on Internet. You seem to offer the kind of facilities I’m looking for. • My friends and I are planning to visit to paris for vacation. Do you have two rooms available • for five nights on July? We plan to stay from July 7 to July 12, 2012. We need the following : • ● Rooms: two double rooms with two single beds • ● We require half board • Does your hotel offer airport shuttle service? If so, can you please pick us up at the airport • at 3:30 P.M. on July 7? Also, one of my friends is blind. Does your hotel have an elevator • with braille elevator buttons? • I have two more questions: • ● How far is it by foot to the nearest shopping mall? • ● Can you send me more informations about the city bus tour in Paris? • Sincerely • Hyo-ri Lee

  4. Here are the 10 writing errors! • To: reservations@hiltonhotel.com • From: hyorilee@awesome.com • Subject: Hotel Reservation • Dear Hilton Hotel, (add a comma) • I read about your hotel on the Internet. You seem to offer the kind of facilities I amlooking for. • My friends and I are planning to visit (delete “to”)Paris for vacation. Do you have two rooms • available for five nights in July? We plan to stay from July 7 to July 12, 2012. We need the • following: (no extra space before the colon) • ● Rooms: two double rooms with two single beds • ● We require half board • Does your hotel offer airport shuttle service? If so, can you please pick us up at the airport • at 3:30 P.M. on July 7? Also, one of my friends is blind. Does your hotel have an elevator • with braille elevator buttons? • I have two more questions: • ● How far is it on foot to the nearest shopping mall? • ● Can you send me more information(delete “s”) about the city bus tour in Paris? • Sincerely, (add a comma) • Hyo-ri Lee

  5. Peer Editing • Read your partner’s hotel reservation email and make corrections with a pencil! • Did your partner … • write a salutation (e.g. Dear Sir or Madam,)? • write four paragraphs? • use contractions (e.g. we’re  we are)? • use informal English (e.g. gonna  going to)? • write a closing (e.g. Sincerely,)? • make any writing errors (grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation)?

  6. Now, please turn in your homework assignments!

  7. Unit 2: Let’s keep in touch Task: Write an informal email to a friend Pages: 14-17

  8. Three Examples Two emails and one letter pages 14-15

  9. Answer these questions with your partner: Which example is the most informal? Which example is the most formal? Underline examples of informal language in emails #1 and #3? Look for two examples of: ▶ contractions (e.g. I’ve been trying to…) ▶ abbreviations (e.g. Only real prob was…) ▶ellipsis (e.g. (I) Had a great time in Turkey.) ▶colloquial expressions (e.g. hang out with his mates) ▶acronyms (e.g. BTW)

  10. Focus on … the language of informal emails Page 16

  11. ▶ Salutation Hi,* REMEMBER to write a comma after the salutation! Hi (name), Hey (name), ▶ Starting an informal email (It’s) Great to hear from you! Thanks for your email! Congratulations!

  12. ▶ Ending an informal email See you soon! Look forward to seeing you! Hope to see you soon! Let’s stay in touch! ▶ Closing Your friend, * REMEMBER to write a comma after the closing! Cheers, Take care, Best wishes, Love,

  13. Let’s Practice! In your notebook, rewrite the two short emails on page 16 using informal language.

  14. Write an email reply to an old friend • page 16 (parts 3 and 4) • Paragraph 1: respond to your friend’s exciting news! • Paragraph 2: changes in your life (e.g. new boyfriend/girlfriend, summer vacation, etc.) • Paragraph 3: news about family and friends (e.g. went clubbing in Hongdae, brother is in the army, etc.) • Paragraph 4: university life (e.g. joined a new club, got straight A’s last semester, went on an MT, etc.) • Paragraph 5: suggest the two of you keep in touch more regularly

  15. Homework Finish writing your email. Then, type your email, print it, and bring it to class in two weeks. Have an AWESOME holiday weekend! See you on Monday, October 10!

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