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CANKAYA UNIVERSITY OFFICE OF BASIC AND ELECTIVE COURSES -ENGLISH UNIT-. WRITING FOR ENG-205 WEEK 9-CONCLUSION. Conclusion vs i ntroduction. CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH. The last paragraph of your essay is the concluding paragraph .
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CANKAYA UNIVERSITY OFFICE OF BASIC AND ELECTIVE COURSES-ENGLISH UNIT- WRITING FOR ENG-205 WEEK 9-CONCLUSION
CONCLUDING PARAGRAPH • Thelastparagraph of youressay is theconcludingparagraph. • Leavethereaderwith a clearunderstanding of youressay’stopic. • Do not introducenewinformationaboutthetopic of theessay.
Concludingtransitions • Beginyourconcludingparagraphwith a concludingtransitionsuch as • In conclusion • Consequently • allin all • Inshort • Tosummarize • Insummary • Toconlude
Types of ConcludingParagraphs • Whilewritingyourconcludingparagraphyoumaychooseamongtheseways, oryou can combinethem: • Summary • + Final commment • Restatement
SummaryConcludingParagraph • Thewriterincludesthe main point of each body paragraph in theconcludingparagraph. • Theconclusionwon’t be completeifthewriterleavesonepointout. • Allthe main pointsshould be mentionedwhilesummarizing • Read the model essay on pages 52-53 andexaminetheconcludingparagraph.
RestatementConcludingParagraph • You can userestatementof the idea of yourthesisstatementin conclusion. • Thewriterrestatesthe main idea of his/her thesisstatement. • Whilerestatingthe main pointsmentioned in thethesisstatement, it is importanttochagethewording of thesentence. • Look at page 53 for a sampleconcludingparagraph.
Final Comment • Adding a final commentto a summaryor a restatement is necessaryforyourconcludingparagraph. • Adding a final commentmakesconcludıngparagraphmorepersonal. • Thewriterwrites a final comment in theconcludingparagraph. It can be an a suggestion, opinion, or a prediction. Final comment of thewritershould be relevanttothetopic.
Whattype of final comment? • People shouldget as muchinformation as they can beforemovingto a city . • Suggestion/advice • Wewillseeincreasedcancer in childrenandpeople of allagesifweallowthecitiestogrowwithoutadequateregulation of pollutingindustries. • Prediction • I thinkchildabuse is themostdisgustingthing in theworld. • Opinion
Practice 1 PAGE 55 • Read theessayandchoosethebestconcludingparagraph • 1 is not suitable as it doesn’tincludeone of themajorpoins • 2 is thebestoption. • 3 is not a goodconcludingparagraphbecause it introduces a newtopic( weather)
Practice 2 • Read theessay • Findtheproblems in thecoclusion • Then, write a betterconcludingparagraphbyusingsummaryand final comment.