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Feedback: Assessment 3

Feedback: Assessment 3. Suspenseful short story aimed at Australian teen readers. Marks. Range: 7/20 – 20/20 Average 14.8. Strengths. Atmosphere as part of creating suspense Settings as part of creating suspense Use of teen protagonists Sources of threat: natural, animal, human

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Feedback: Assessment 3

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  1. Feedback: Assessment 3 Suspenseful short story aimed at Australian teen readers

  2. Marks • Range: 7/20 – 20/20 • Average 14.8

  3. Strengths • Atmosphere as part of creating suspense • Settings as part of creating suspense • Use of teen protagonists • Sources of threat: natural, animal, human • Partial resolutions – very satisfying!

  4. To improve …

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  6. For those aiming high

  7. For those aiming high

  8. Always remember: in any genre … in any story … for any audience … Empathy + Threat + Delay = Suspense … = a page-turner = an engaged reader!

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