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Bellringers 71-75. Bellringers for all classes. Bellringer #71. Give copies of the story to Joe and myself. Joe has heard about it, but he hasn’t read it hisself. It isn’t fair for yourself to be the only one with a copy. Corrections: 1) to Joe and me 2) read it himself 3) fair for you.
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Bellringers 71-75 Bellringers for all classes
Bellringer #71 • Give copies of the story to Joe and myself. • Joe has heard about it, but he hasn’t read it hisself. • It isn’t fair for yourself to be the only one with a copy. Corrections: 1) to Joe and me 2) read it himself 3) fair for you
Bellringer # 72 • I had chose a good book and had fell asleep reading it. • The door weren’t locked, and it must have blew open. • When I woke up, I seen the open door and begun to get scared. Corrections: 1) chosen and take out had 2) wasn’t and blown 3) saw and began
Bellringer # 73 • I have a pale, blue hat that I wear with my light, twill jacket. • On a freezing windy day, I wear a heavy, quilted jacket. Corrections: 1) remove commas 2) remove comma after heavy
Bellringer # 74 • He spoke quite polite and asked me to go direct to the store. • Normally, I could have done what he asked easy, but I felt real tired. • The faucet dripped so bad all night that I couldn’t sleep good. Corrections: 1) politely and directly 2) easily and really 3) badly and well
Bellringer # 75 • In the middle of the month after my birthday we had a heat wave. • Around our house and all down the block trees and flowers were budding. • For awhile in the middle of winter it felt and looked like spring. Corrections: 1) add comma after birthday 2) add comma after block 3) add comma after winter