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Peer check of Personality Essay. MLA FORMAT????. 5 paragraphs?. Introduction – following the HIPP format?. 1. “Hook” - Did they hook you? . If not… give them an idea.
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5 paragraphs? Introduction – following the HIPP format?
1. “Hook” - Did they hook you? If not… give them an idea
2) Did they introduce the assignment fully (using at least two of the following):“Do What You Are”“Myers Briggs Personality Type Indictator” Santiago High SchoolMrs. MomaneyPeriod #ERWC IV If not, make a suggestion for what they should add
In their intro… did they have a “P”osition statement (thesis) In other words… did they argue whether the “Do What You Are” assessment was accurate or not? If so… leave it alone. If not… in margin write “I could not find your thesis. Were tests accurate or not?”
5 paragraphs? Introduction Conclusion??
Paragraph #5 - Conclusion Did they come to a conclusion? Do they reintroduce things from their intro like “Santiago High School”, And the “Do What You Are” assessment) If not, tell them they need to do so! Re-“Hook” – Check out the last sentence… did they use “parallel structure” to end the essay?
Personality type Why I am an “E” Why I am an “N” Why I am an “T” Why I am an “J” Possible Careers Radio Broadcaster Television Journalist Elementary School Teacher Extent to which I agree 3rd “social and like to get attention” (www.personalitypage.com) “often acts before they think” (Do What you are) “very self-reliant and makes Their own decisions” (www.personalitypage.com)
Bonus points if you add the details (sub-sub points)
ADD an Outlineand add to/edit your paper.Resubmit by one week from today!