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Honors English Mrs. Kerr 2013. “If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.” ― Stephen King. How to help your student succeed:. Encourage use of the Writing Lab Do not edit with a pen in hand
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Honors English Mrs. Kerr 2013 “If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.” ― Stephen King
How to help your student succeed: • Encourage use of the Writing Lab • Do not edit with a pen in hand • Ban Sparknotes, Cliffnotes, etc. from your home • Talk to your student about personal responsibility (absences, field trips, note-taking, accurately recording homework, etc. ) • Remind your student that grades are not given they are earned • Respect the difficulty of transitioning from unleveled to leveled classes. • *PowerSchool*
Lit Circles: Danger of a Single Story TED talk, ChimamandaAdichie 2009
Literature How has myth shaped language? It was the best of times, it was the worst of times… [freshman year??] But soft, what Light through yonder window breaks?
What happens to civilization when all the rules disappear? Literature • Short Stories • Poetry • Essays • Editorials What happens to a dream deferred?
Freshman Writing Quarter Goals: • Prepare students to meet the expectations of honors level writing at the high school • Use proven methods of providing Grammar instruction (Image grammar, sentence composing, sentence combining) to improve student writing and writing-awareness
Here’s what you can expect to learn this term: Students will be able to: • distinguish between abstract and concrete language • understand diction • use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of experiences, events, setting, and/or characters in short compositions
You will be able to identify and use the following: • Parts of speech (nouns, verbs, adjective, adverbs, prepositions, and conjunctions) • Image Grammar: appositives, active verbs, participial phrases, etc. • Sentence parts (subject, predicate, clauses, and phrases) • Dependent and independent marker words and coordinating conjunctions • Sentence types (simple, compound, complex, compound-complex) • Punctuation (colon, semicolon, dash, comma) “…the best-written student paragraphs contained complex sentences with dependent clauses like although and despite, signaling a shift in logic within a sentence. Struggling students, on the other hand, were unable to complete a complex sentence.” The Atlantic, Oct. 2012
Using the Tools to Improve Writing Professional example of adjective phrase: Numb of all feeling, empty as a shell, still he clung to life, and the hours droned by. JK Rowling, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire Imitate the sample: ________ and _______ , still he clung to life, and the hours droned by. Professional example of an appositive: It went away slowly, the feeling of disappointment that came sharply after the thrill that made his shoulders ache. --Ernest Hemingway
The “Hook” for students: • Inventory of Grammatical Knowledge & promise I will raise their earning potential by at least $30,000 by the end of the year • I Won't Hire People Who Use Poor Grammar. Here's Why. by Kyle WiensJuly 20, 2012
Freshman Writing Semester Part II: Paragraphs - Essays • Topic and Thesis statements • Unity, Flow, Coherence • Evidence • Quotation Integration • Literary Analysis